Thanks for the response. I thought the video explained a lot of what was lacking on the page. I would just distill it down to two points:

* Paperspace gives you a private computer in the cloud. You can access this private computer with any web browser.

* The paperweight is a $50 machine that does only one thing: run a web browser you can use to get to your paperspace cloud computer.

I am obviously not a good copy writer so those sentences are boring, but I think that's what I'd want to know when visiting your page.