We have been working for over a year on this app, which takes data from multiple official sources, and synthesizes it using an aviation concept of 'personal minimums'. We worked hard to polish the app in a niche which otherwise contains some pretty ugly apps.

I would love some honest feedback on our landing page and how we could improve it to drive more conversions.

Thanks!

>Personalized, color-coded weather reports and warnings based on your personal minimums.

Sounds weird to me, not sure why. you might want to consider alternate wording.