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		topmonk on Feb 10, 2020 \| parent \| context \| favorite \| on: Published my first novel, Blue Screen, how a young... Read the first couple of chapters. Not bad, flows well. Maybe being a little more descriptive wouldn't hurt. Thanks.

kylebenzle on Feb 11, 2020 [–]

Thanks so much! I'm dying for feedback, chapter 15 is where it deep :)

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